I saw 2 extinguised cigarettes which are half buried on the trash sand on the street. It looks like 2 Human bodies buried next to each other in parallel. One day this will become true as a result of smoking. I was worried about those two souls.
Didnt they knew about the worth of life...
Didnt they knew abt the outcome of smokin...
What about their families? Their future ...
The cigar between the 2 fingers looks like fire of life , glowed with sacrifice. They were mercilessly quenched and leading to kinda suicide attempt ..!
Tat puff of smoke at the max will give some warmth on a snowy day to kill the winter / tension. There is a life beyond the winter. You have summer, autumn, spring to enjoy guys.
Dont you want to see colors of life?. Will they come out of illusion world !!!
Trying my level best 2 tell all my frnds abt tis & it wud be gr888 to see @least a single soul listen to these words...
And sometin to pen down in the form of poetic words ...
5 comments:
Aryan,
That was a Good One!!The pathetic part of this habit they do not realise that this habit affects the people around them also.
Well educated guys nd even gals off late are more into this.
I get angry on those who claim such habit as a stress releaver!!
Smiles,
Ramya Ramani
Excellent one dude. the poem portrays the real life situation and hope atleast few will change their mind.
Keep writing ...
that was heartfelt....its a really bad habit..smoking the ppl who smoke harm those arnd them apart from killing themselves too
Lovely poem dude. u jus proved again.
Tx guyz...Hope u r doing ur part too.
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